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PostSubject: Short film I did for school   Thu May 29, 2008 10:46 pm

This is a short (5 min) I made for school in the last few month's. It's called "The Ritual"
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PostSubject: Re: Short film I did for school   Fri May 30, 2008 12:45 am

OK, just watched it
So I will give my honnest opinion

I think it is good quality, also like the music which goes very well with it. I like that you are wondering what will happen, and the surprise is very exciting - that is very very good, loved it
The only thing I liked a tiny bit less is the end cause it slow down a bit the all thing
Not sure how to say it...

I'm wondering the meaning behind it, and behind the end, is there a point, a meaning behind the painting thing?

But I really liked it, think for a student work, it is really good

yess

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PostSubject: Re: Short film I did for school   Fri May 30, 2008 1:15 am

pity it requires quicktime-plugin Sad



i hate that webplugin, always plays mp3's instead of downloading


any alternatives for me to watch it ?
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PostSubject: Re: Short film I did for school   Fri May 30, 2008 9:43 am

Kryll wrote:
pity it requires quicktime-plugin Sad



i hate that webplugin, always plays mp3's instead of downloading


any alternatives for me to watch it ?
you could download it from here http://www.bepbroos.nl/sal/ritueel.mp4
and then play it from your computer

Chrisy wrote:
OK, just watched it
So I will give my honnest opinion

I think it is good quality, also like the music which goes very well with it. I like that you are wondering what will happen, and the surprise is very exciting - that is very very good, loved it
The only thing I liked a tiny bit less is the end cause it slow down a bit the all thing
Not sure how to say it...

I'm wondering the meaning behind it, and behind the end, is there a point, a meaning behind the painting thing?

But I really liked it, think for a student work, it is really good

Thanks Smile
About the slowing down. I think i know what you mean... It's Probably an editing thing. (editing is not my strongest side)
There is a "meaning" but it's not fun if i tell it. Just leaving people thinking about it is better. Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Short film I did for school   Fri May 30, 2008 12:04 pm

Nice Happy2

I agree with the slowing down, but in my opinion, it might be a good thing as well...It helps get the meaning across (at least, if I understood it correctly, there's always the possiblity that I'm seeing things that aren't there of course Wink)

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PostSubject: Re: Short film I did for school   Fri May 30, 2008 1:07 pm

not bad... Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Short film I did for school   Fri May 30, 2008 5:31 pm

Everlong wrote:
you could download it from here http://www.bepbroos.nl/sal/ritueel.mp4
and then play it from your computer

ah yes, figured that already out yesterday, after i got that far as into installing the quicktime-alternative (after intensively uninstalling quicktime-related software) Very Happy
the plugin gave me the sourcecode for retrieving the information

so i have it on my pc


review will follow soon Wink
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